Friday, September 3, 2010
Momma
My parents are crazy; well my mom is. She is awesome, she is way short. She is the best mom anybody could ask for. She has red hair. My mom is 5’1 so she is short. I probably resemble my mom the most. I can’t stand my dad, but who cares. I can’t stand my dad because he doesn’t want me in his life. He told my brother and me that he wishes that we would get hit by a dump truck, and that we were both a mistake. I have just said “I’m not going to even worry bout him, if he don’t want me in his life then I don’t want him in mine.” I don’t need my dad, when I have my baby I’m going to be a better dad than him. He has taught me how not to raise and love my kids. He has taught me to not abandon my kids if they have some kind of problem, such as a drug problem. Also he has taught me to keep my kids close as possible unlike him.
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i'm sure every one loves there mom.. u have a great story to tell and its good you want to be a good dad and always there for your kids you have learned from your dads mistakes
i think you could make it a little bit longer. you did a great job a e
i like how you used good word choice. i think you could use a little more detail. i love my mom too.
I like your voice in this, it kept me reading. I understand your situation with your dad because i have the same with mine. You will be a good father if you choose to be.
I think you learned a lot from your experience which is a good thing. Maybe you might have wanted to talk about your mom like explained why you like her so much. I also am closer to my mom. I don't much like my father either. Great post!
i can really relate to the way you feel i think that you did a really good job on this i think that everyone can feel the emotion and sincerity in it.
Waz up bud. I really like your blog. You titled your blog mamma so you should have explained it a little bit more. I really think it is great how you have learned how not to raise your baby from your childhood experience. I have allot of respect for you because you want the best for your child because I know I sure do
I think it is really good that you recognize those bad traits in your father so that you can be a different kind of parent. Hopefully we learn from other people's mistakes and make ourselves better for them.
Well Im really sorry about your dad some people are just jerks, but at least you have an amazing mom I can relate to ya. one thing to work on would be your sentence fluency. but that would be it.
I like how you described your mom
I LIKE YOUR STORY, IS ORGANIZED REALLY WELL. I COULD ALSO RELATE TO IT MY DAD WAS THE SAME WAY. THE ONLY THING IS THAT YOUR TITTLE IS MOMMA AND YOU TALK ABOUT HOW BAD YOU DAD IS. MAYBE YOU SHOULD TALK MORE ABOUT HOW GOOD OF A MOM YOU HAVE. OR JUST CHANGE THE TITTLE.
i love how you say your mom is awesome, she is way short. Short people are awesome.. i would know ha jk. But good job, you could make it a little longer but other than that its straight. I can kinda relate to this. But i only experienced this for 3 years of my life. So to have to deal with it your hole life must suck. im sorry baby girl. things will get better and you'll be a good daddy.
Good blog and good spelling. and good luck at being a dad. you will need it.
i feel what you mean dog your story makes sense you want to be a good dad instead of a bad dad just keep your head up dont worry about what happen out there in the world it was a good story
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