My mom and dad are both Mexican my parents are not together no more. My dad has anger problems and drinks a lot. My mom left him when I was 13 he use to hit her that is why she left him. I think my mom was right to leave him. I mean who would like to live whit a person that treats you worse then a dog. I know I didn’t like my dad and I did hate him for all the time I lived whit him. Even when I didn’t live whit him no more I hated him till I had my kid. When I had my kid I saw how hard life could be and I understood how he felt. He had a job that paid him like 700 $ every two weeks and six kids. Now I could see what he went true but he still had no right to treat us the way he did.
My mom has her goods and bad things but mostly good I should say. My mom is not good at making choices. She is not so good at being a mom no more too. Before she was a really good mom and now she is more like a dad. She comes from work and is tired she doesn’t really care about what we do no more she don’t cook for us no more. She spends her time whit her boyfriend most of the time.
She has a lot of good things about her even if she makes bad choices. My mom doesn’t judge me for my bad choices. I’m thankful to her for giving me life and always being around when I need her. I thank her for not kicking me and chucky out on the street.
4 comments:
I think some thing you can work on is your word choice and your spelling. I really liked your blog because you didn't hold back. I can relate to most of the things your saying bacause most hispanic families go through that.
You can work on punctuation and grammar because you leave out periods and comma's. You can improve your conventions by checking where to put in punctuation. You did a great job of explaining and staying on task. I'm sorry to hear about this and i hope you doing all right.
I think it is important for us to know our parents - really know them. If we can look at their weaknesses and their strengths, then we can take the best of them and put that inside ourselves. There is always the hope that each generation gets better and better.
My mother was also a working mom. Some days it was really hard on her. I know she tried her best. Working and taking care of a family is very hard - as you well know. I don't doubt that your mom loves you. Sometimes life is just so overwhelming that it feels like we are drowning.
I agree with Cory. punctation could be fixed
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