I don’t like people who blame there problems on others. Some people do that a lot whit out even seeing it. An example is some one is on drugs it’s hard to leave drugs but at the end is our choice. We are the ones hurting our self by using drug and blaming it on others. What do you think that by sitting down and smoking Meth your going to stop your parents from fighting? I say no! Life is hard, but hold on and be strong.
So next time your sitting there saying, I hate my parents when they fight that is why I use meth. Well why don’t you ask your self what is the rill reason that you do drugs. I used drugs because I liked them plus I didn’t have anything good in my life. I didn’t really want to make any thing of my life I was just stupid, I new that prison was my destiny. But I didn’t know what the future had in store for me.
The future brought me a son that I love very much. I am committed to be there for him till the end till I die. So no more drugs for me or blaming my problems on others I have respect for my son in many ways. He has respect for me and I always want to have my sons respect. I’m not going to blame no one for my problems and I’m going to keep my head up.
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One way I think you can improve your writing is to use better word word choice. I really like and agree with your statements and beliefs.
Josefina - I really admire you and your strength. You really are the type of person who has taken responsibility for your life and really changed it. You are such a good example to me and I'm so glad that I have gotten to know you.
I think you could work on your introduction a little and get our attention a little better but a can agree with what you wrote people should take responsibility for their own actions
Ya that's ture there are so many people that do that.They dont realize what the real reason they do it.they blame people for what they do no one forse them to do them and if they keep blaming people they are going to start to believe there lies and wont stop. They have to realize the truth and be ture to every one about it or its all on them.
That's funny because i hate people like that to.
I like how you worded everything good job
"I hate my parents when they fight that is why I use meth. "
Well I was sort of like this but i used the excuse its my moms fault i ran because she was never there for me when i needed her now i just feel like i have to get love some where else but it's not true i do it cause i choose to do it its all my choices not any one elses.
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