“You stupid bi*ch you are just like your mom!” My dad yelled to me from inside the house. I didn’t want to go in, because my mom had left to a party. I knew if I went inside he would hit me just because he was mad and angry, because my mom had went to a birthday party. He came home and asked me to go in the house. I refuse to go in, because the beating would begin.
Instead I ran to the street crying I didn’t want to go inside. My dad treated me like trash just because he felt like trash him self. I stayed home because I didn’t have anything nice to wear. My dad was out drinking with his friends like every Sunday. So my mom thought it was ok for me to stay home. I did enjoy an hour by my self at home listing to music, till the beast showed up.
Then next thing you know I was running for my life. I ran, and ran he couldn’t catch me. I was small and quick, he was fat and slow. He was mad at me and I was enjoying the moment, his too fat can’t catch up saying mean things to me till I lost him.
Next thing you know I find my self at the store talking to a bunch of guys that knew me and my family. One was telling me to go home or my dad was going to kick my butt. I told him that’s why I’m here because he wants to beat me for no reason. Next thing you know my dad passes by. All the guys pretend not to know me.
He yells at me to come home and that he had called my mom and he had told her how stupid I was being, and that she is on her way. By the time I got home my mom was there. She asked me what was I doing on the street and why was I being disrespectful to my dad. I told her that he was being mean to me and that he was drunk and I was scared to be next to him because of the times he had tried to touch my sister. My dad said I was talking trash and that I just ran always to go kiss some guy. My mom didn’t know who to believe but my mom said that, I should get a beating for being on the street.
8 comments:
Dang thats really good but really sad. You did really good explianing everything was going on. It went tagather really good, you used really good wording. An im sorry your dad was such a jerk. You dont ever desever to be treated like that. But i love you Josefina!!!!
You know, that truly is a sad story. I have never really had that happend to me, But if it did I honestly wouldn't be scared to fight back, or go to the police about this. I like how you had the courage to tell a story that is big and sad in yourself. You need to stand up for yourself. Don't let a slob bring you down, cause honestly are you not better then that? I don't know you but I can bet that you are. Well great story and I caught 1 grammar error but other then that well written. But good luck, and stand up for yourself.
Dang Josefina I'm so sorry that a girl like you had to go through something like that. i feel you pain.I can relate to you because my mom dated a man that beat her.And me and his son Chris beat the crap out of him for hitting my mom. Because in my eyes ladies never deserve to get hit . Because i think that if you say that you are a man then you won't hit a female at all.
WoW!!!! that must been hard ya i know what you mean. i liked it the way you expressed your self in your paper. it is hard because iv been through that too and the same thing happened but it wasn't my sister it was me and yea it sucks but no body should ever keep it in cuz at the end it hurts more but you only hurting your self but that was good i enjoyed reading it.....
My dad is a drunk he would come home from work and he would beat the crap out of me for no reason. So i ran to the streets to drugs and gangs and when my dad would come home drunk i would beat his ass because you can win when there drunk i would take the beating he would try to give me step mom because i don't like it when my dad hit female that's when i started running from home and not coming home because i don't like hitting my dad but you have too because you don't call the cops on your family
I don't mean to disrespect but your dad sounds two faced. Its funny he points out how bad you were being but never tells your mom what he did. I hate people that are like that. You did a good job on your paper you got perfect details i liked it.
i know how that feels my dad used to yell at me and abuse me when i lived with him but when he left my life sense then iv never liked him because i was six years old when he did and when i see him i will hit him.
Damm! I'm sorry I know how hard this is for you. I liked how you expressed your self in your paper. I Know how you fell about your dad touching your sister because i know how it feel because this happened to my cousin when she was 7 years old , when she told her dad he went crazy he came to the house one day and hit her step dad with a bat and beat him up bad, her step dad was in the hospital he had a tumor in his head he was blind, that's what he gets for doing that shit to her.I wouldn't want to be near anyone if they were drunk because I think drunk people always get aggressive.
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