Friday, April 29, 2011

Melinda's School

Yes, I think that Melinda’s school can be a safer and better school if they address the school issues. If they did that and in force the school rules it would feel better then it use to and people will like the school even more. I guess you can say that the school isn’t so bad it’s ok but sometimes it gets out of hand and that’s not good for the kids that want to do well and be successful in life. If they had a better security kids wouldn’t be bringing drugs or alcohol or even getting into fights and that’s not a good thing to have in a school that is filled with nice students and teachers. My old school use to be like that. There would always be something bad going on like kids bringing drugs or people getting into fights, but now its better it’s safer to go to and have fun while you’re learning. If Melinda’s life would be better just if her school was better so that she won’t be scared to go to school and have to worry about some kids that go there that creep her out.

8 comments:

Davis said...

I agree. Her school issues need to be addressed. If not it could lead to more incidents like Melinda's. Sounds like school is rough to me. Yes, school is rough, mine too.

Luis said...

i agree with you i think if they in forces the real issues at the school. she gets scared to go to school because every one hates her an because of Andy Evans. this is a good paper nice work keep it up

david said...

I totally agree with what you are saying. I don't think that they should try to force the rules on to the kids. I think she should try to get her own life on track so that it'll be better at school for her.

dillon m said...

i think you need to puit a space between the paragraph and make it smaller to make two

Tim said...

If they really do bring up something like that then she will have more sense of security.

cody said...

Not only her school but others as well almost all school needs to address issues so that the student body can be prepared when put in certain situations. especially with serious issues like in melinda's case. So yes i agree with your statement.

Jeremy said...

I agree with you because that school should be a lot safer teachers their are weird but besides that great job.

Bethony said...

I agree with you. I would love it if my schools would address the issues that go on during school. Even the ones that don't, it would be nice to be able to talk to somebody who understands what you have been going through and will help you get through it. I know we have that here but I feel like some things I go through nobody would understand no matter how hard i try to tell them. If schools were to address issues, there would be less drama.