Tuesday, May 31, 2011

Myth

Once there was a guy so powerful he could do everything he could think of. This guy was a god he was a half lion and have human his name was lord Artec first he thought how to make fire and he made this huge ball of fire now there was light ion the darkness. The light looked so bright he called it the sun. The sun was so lonely that the god gave him sons but they were far away from them so that he could not burn them, he called these little ones the stars. The darkness was mostly all full of light except the spaces were they were apart from each other. The god Artic liked what he had created but he thought that it wasn’t enough. He crated this little rocks each of them he gave a name and differences. One was full of water the other with rock the other with just gas and one with just rock. The god liked the one with just rocks so he put more time in it he added earth to it, but he thought that it was to dry so he added water. Now the rock had puddles of water almost everywhere. The god putt different kinds of plants on that rock and other stuff like animals. He called this rock planet water since there was so much water. These little animals that the god put in this planet was starting to change they were furious so he called them dinosaurs. But he needed them to show him love but they just wanted to kill each other and didn’t have brains so he send a little rock and wiped all of them so they died. The god started to think more and he thought of people that could move and he created men out of the bones and flesh left from the dinosaurs. The god didn’t want his creation t start eating each other like his creations from the past so he gave them fruit and plants that tasted good. God wanted them to put other things in there so he put animals but now they were much smaller. But the men started to eat them so god put in animals that could defend themselves so they would be there much longer. The men were lonely so the god gave them women now they had all they wanted and were now praying to there god but later on everyone started to be different and they started to think of other gods instead of Artec. Artec did not liked this idea he was so mad that he started to shake the planet water and all the water started to flood the earth and all of his creation was now gone.

6 comments:

Preston said...

I thought you did a great job on your myth. I liked how you destroyed the creations on the very end. You just gotta watch out for the spelling and grammar though. Good job!

david said...

Great paper, i like how you explained things in this paper. Thats cool that you made the stars the children of the sun. i like this paper. Good job

dm said...

think it was good but you need do need to work on grammer and your spelling

vosco said...

i like how you kept it original but you did put some things from our past.

Brandee said...

Gustavo!!! Your vary bright and creative. I like how you put your story. It had a lot of different ideas. keep* up the* good* work.

kc said...

awesome paper! you are so creative i enjoyed reading your myth!