Friday, April 8, 2011

Speak

I think Melinda fainted because she just made friends and she’s actually talking to some people and she’s kind of realizing it in her stomach I don’t know. Feelings and she’s hadn’t had friends or any one to talk to for a long time, So maybe this,  actually because what made her faint Is the person who raped her Melinda saw his face in her mind and that’s what made her faint. I think Melinda thinks way to back on things that’s probably why she’s not making friends because she’s always thinking about the past. The past is making her depressed even though its not happening right now it’s over and done with so she needs to worry about the present and the future. Melinda has one friend and its heather but heather I think she uses Melinda just a little bit because she asks Melinda to do posters for the food drive because she’s in some type of group with some other girls and they do some stuff for school. And heather needs the posters done right or she’s getting kicked out of the group by Martha, so shes asked Melinda to do it that’s why I think she’s using Melinda because Melinda’s good  she asked her just so she doesn’t get kicked out of the group. 

6 comments:

nico b said...

I disagree ,because she fainted when IT touch her.But everything else was good.I like your grammar. I enjoyed this one.

nico b said...

I agree.
I think the same bout the closet.
Nobody will ever tell her anything if she is away.
It's just like her own world.
Good job

vosco said...

i think that she is not even trying to make friends in the first place.

uriel said...

I kinda agree. Shes probably nervouis about school. Shes bearly getting the hang of getting along with people.

jesus v said...

Work on trying to be professional on your spelling and grammar. You should also organize your paragraphs a little more. Good job

jesus v said...

Work on trying to be professional on your spelling and grammar. You should also organize your paragraphs a little more. Good job