Tuesday, May 31, 2011

The Buddah Creation

In the beginning, there was four gods. The sky gods name was Hakalulu, the sun god name was Tulu, the moon goddess name was Kiki, and the earth goddess name was Paprika. They all we’re doing what they normally do. But the Hakalulu the sky god was bored and deiced to make something…. He started blowing wind on the earth goddess, after a second these trees started coming out of her, he was so surprised at what happened he started doing it again but thinking of other things that might be more interesting. All the rest of the god and goddess we’re so excited they started to try it for themselves, but they notice that blowing wind didn’t work for them. Tulu the sun god started spinning in circles and mountains rised from the ground. The moon goddess Kiki started singing and she made the stars for the night and the water for the ground. And the earth goddess just sat there because everything that the other god and goddess we’re doing was coming out form under her and creating this wonderful beauty on her. So together they made the universe. A couple days after figuring this out, they stared thinking about humans so they can take care of this land. So Kiki and Tulu went together and made twins, the twin we’re different in every way. One girl and one boy. They we’re not related at all so the girl Noemi and the boy Tagalua went off and made some more kids. Soon there was a lot of humans running around and the god and goddess we’re vary please but there was one thing missing… there was no food to eat for the people so Tulu started spinning again and animals started coming form every direction but Tulu didn’t want the people to eat them all at once so he set different animals in different places. But he made sure that the humans had some things to fear. The gods we’re so pleased at what they had created and no more we’re they unsatisfied.

8 comments:

nate said...

I have one question: is this the real Buddhist Creation Belief, or your own personal belief? Anyways, I thought it was very creative, much more than others I have read because it has different ideas. The Gods blew wind, or sang, or spun around, which is very creative and different. Good job and it was fun reading your story.

gusTavo said...

This kind of sounds like a real story but you put it together very well. I saw some misspelled words but for the rest of it good job.

GusTavo V said...

this is a realy good story. you need to work on your paragraphing. i like how you've named your gods and your story.

dm said...

i like how you put your story and the details its creative and made up good

vosco said...

i do like the names that you decided to use i think you did a great job.

Shaunda said...

I like your story but I seen some miss spell words but I like the name that u made up good job.

kyle said...

i like your story thing i think u could change is the religion cause its based on budda and this is supposed to be your own made up myth

jesus v said...

were did u come up with these names there pretty good i like how each of them made something diffent but u should really paragragh more an punctions