Tuesday, May 31, 2011
The Creator
Before time began there was only chaos and darkness and the was no one but the god Meetaya he was the god of fire, water, earth and the sky he also had a brother his name was Dak he controlled others emotions. He did this by getting in their head. There was also a couple female gods their names were Keri, Hope, and Faith. The king of all the gods was Zek. He was the creator of all things. He created man, animals. There were volcanoes all over the world man had nowhere to build their homes and building that the gods wanted them to build so men and women prayed to the gods to get rid of some of the volcanoes. They prayed and prayed until their prayers were answered. The gods made some of the volcanoes into mountains. So Meetaya made sue to make a land where all the pure people to go. The only problem was that the only pure people were the gods and this made him upset so an earthquake was big it wiped out all of the people except for two of the smartest people their names are Lane and Sage they hid underground and when the quakes were over they came out side and they found no one alive except for them and them only. By then Zek the creator all things was really mad at Meetaya for what he had done to his wonderful creations and decided to take his powers from him and make human himself and see how he likes being one of them and after a few century’s he would let him back in Laon and he and his sister both ending up having to pay for his mistake that he made his sister was so mad she ended up killing her own brother and the sister ended up back in Laon and things have been the same since then the year this happened was 200B.C.
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7 comments:
This is very confusing.. I had trouble getting everything, I had to read it a few times but it was good when I acualy understood it, good job
you had good detail but you had some words that were cut out in some sentenses
i like that Lane and Sage was smart enough to hid from the earthquake but common sence, when there is an earthquake you dont wanna hide underground because that is probably the worst place to go when there is an earthquake but other than that great job on the paper keep it up!
this story is good you just need to write more. i think that if you made it longer it would be much better, other than that i thought that it was good i like how he created stuff.
Hey,your myth was great. It has a lot of differnt things in it, and ideas. Vary different from the ones i have read. The ending had a little twist which is always good. Great job.
vosco, you did very well and i thank you for trying in all your classes and be a wonderful kid any way possible you have a pretty cool myth and i think that the coolest thing that is in your myth is that zek is the god of all gods.
Good job. I think you really thought this through. Your a good writer.
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