Once there was a god so powerful that he was powerful enough to perform a talent so good he made the earth, lands, water, everything people see now. One day this person gave himself a name called Neaten because he was so neat at his work he always performed, neaten was a very unspectacular person anyone would ever imagine. He was a rude and angry person so he made man on this earth, just son he could be rude and cruel To all the Man. Neat got sick of treating people rudely so he created some beast like creatures to do the job for him. A couple of weeks went by when neaten was hit with an idea of making another human of women. So he did create women so that the women could have children so he can raise some of them himself to be gods when he dies.
Another couple of weeks went by when all of a sudden a glum like shiny dull light appears in the sky when it explodes and creates another world called palace of one.
This palace of one had one girl god with the name zeta she was always complaining about this and that when finally Neaten went to her world and asked her to marry him
Just she would shut up and well it worked. Neaten and Zeta had very few kids a little after they got married. They had kids named Ribald, maniacally, and Spear. When they were born they had a ritual where Neaten would put burning acid on his kids foreheads To put a extra eye because it would help them see there lives a lot better then ever. Soon after that they were hunting for some healing powers just incase they needed them and all of a sudden again Ribald steps on a stone and they end up in some type of ugly, nasty, dirty cave like darkness. They got frightened and was trying to find away out couple days later they find a way out but no where they expected to be.
Soon they ran into some wizard like person and they start talking and the wizard says That he made the earth and that he would have to fight Neaten for it but we all know Neaten would win so Neaten won and he stayed the same so did every thing else. And this a made up myth I did.
4 comments:
I like that Neaten made creatures to be mean for him because he didnt like to do it. I like that he made children to become gods after he dies. I dont think that people should put acid on their kids's forehead, they could've found another way to punish them but thats just my opinion.
Dillon, this was a good myth. Vary creative I like you put the story and the ending was good as well. but great story good job.!!!
i like how the god created the earth and stuff. this story is good you just need to work on your gramar.keep it up your really good.
nice story. but i do think you need to work on your grammer.
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