In the beginning of the new creation era, there were four gods and one goddess. The first of the four gods his name is Pelotas, he is the creator of dogs and all small creatures. The second god is Maximums; he is in charge of making the rivers, lakes, oceans and the mountains. The third god is Dodge; he is in charge of the wind and rain all over this new world they have discovered. The fourth god is Decade, he is in charge of the weather and the seasons and he has the decision to make it hot or cold. The first and only goddess is Examis she is in charge of the moon and the sun rays. At night all the gods turn into different animals and roams the planet that they have created so that they can get a feel of the planet. Soon after they had the planet done Maximums and Examis had decided to go a head and have children.
They only had two children a boy and a girl the first child’s name was Mannie, he was in charge of keeping man kind in shape when they reproduce. The second child’s name was Spectrum; she was in charge of making the planet have human life on it. Their parents were not able to make any more kids so it was up to Mannie and Spectrum to make the planet bigger, when they started having kids they taught them to worship Examis and Maximums and do what they say for them to do.
The main Gods and Goddess’s that created the planet is Pelotas, Maximums, and Examis, the planets creation started with straight blackness and a fire ball dropping to the planet making a crater in the ground. All the gods made the planet all together but some did more than others also, the way the water ways were formed is by Maximums getting his heart broken and his tears made crests in the planet and formed rivers that turned into lakes and oceans, and his runny nose dripped down and kept piling up and formed mountains. Pelotas made all the animals with his DNA from himself. And that’s how the planet was made.
Before the Gods and Goddess’s kids had kids they tried to make the humans out of clay but that didn’t work because when it would rain or snow the clay humans would just deteriorate so they had to find out a new way to make up humans so worship them, they tried to make them out of wood but that didn’t work because when they’d get into fights they would be breaking their limbs off and their wood would warp also, finally they had their kids make kids and the gods taught them how to plow and keep the planet growing and keeping up on stuff.
9 comments:
I like your idea of the creation of all things. I thought it was cool how there was a creation era and other era's. I also thought it was interesting how the gods had children and they were to make the planet and human life. In addition, I liked how Gods tried to create humans at first but couldn't, so their children carried out that task for them. Good ideas and good paper.
I really liked your creation myth! I liked how you threw a science spin on your story. I also liked how your names kinda sounded like latin. Good Job!
David. Your myth was great, you have a big imagination!! i like how the world was created. The gods and goddess names we're creative. keep up the good work.!
i liked your your creation myth david. i like all your gods names and what they do. i like they tried to make humas and how we were created. good story
i like how they had keep the planet growing because in reality the planets grow by its self and then stops when it needs to
i like the way you expressed the way the gods expressed the way they were feeling.
Great job. I like how you put a lot of thought into it. I like how you made it super long. Because it shows that you actually really do care about school and even your grades so keep it up man.
David i like your myth and i like your names that you made up i like and i like the girl Spectrum how she was incharge of making plants for the humens.
like how u but detail in how the gods and how you add sienxce to and how you used good paragraphing nice job david
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