Fire, fire in your eyes.
Fire, fire never dies.
Water, water gets hotter.
Ice, ice rolls the dice.
Green, green, blue, blue.
Red, red I’m dead.
Burn, burn it’s your turn.
Just keep burning in the skies.
Let me die, just let me die.
Let me fly, just let me fly.
Burn, burn it’s your turn.
Fire, fire in you eyes.
Let me die, just let me die.
Kill me now Kill me now it’s my turn to die.
Suicide feels much better
Its okay let me die, just let me go.
4 comments:
I think you could work on not saying the same words twice and space up the rhyme. you did a great job. I think suicide is a permenent solution for a temporary problem.
Vosco Do we need to put on the reds at the group home? lol I think that if your going to write something about somebody else. You got to at least include that. other than tht i like the rhymes and not so much the meaning.
just let you guys know it is not about me it is about my friend who attempted to commit suicide.
Well I think you did a really good job. I think to make it better you could stop repeating your self.
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