How could you!
Where do you get
Off going behind my
Back, Smoking, Drinking,
Doing DUSTER!
I hope you know
That I’m going
To start up again
Just to prove a point
To you! Uhhh….
“F” that I know how
Addicting that is and
I’m not going to put
My self in that kind of
Situation ever again!
You have made me so mad!
I have know
Idea how I feel right now!
7 comments:
I think you actually do know how your feeling. you could work on making it sound more like a poem with rhymes. you did a great job expressing how you feel.
Stay sober bro! You can do it! I BELIEVE IN YOU lol(: You're really strong. You've been put through some horse crap, but you find the non crap side and do something good about it and push the negative out(:
♥Elee
nice i think it was very well done. I like how you explained how you feel.
This is a great poem how you express your feelings. Also how u show you have matured, and you also stop yourself from going back to your bad ways. Good job.
Addiction isn't something fun to have. i feel you bro on everything you wrote down. I myself is straggling with addiction. and let me tell ya I feel the same way.
This is a good poem because it shows how you feel about this person.
love ends up like that man you ask and they only listin but never do they try as far ass they can but they only got so much patence in there life just try and help and maby u can stop it
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