Friday, March 11, 2011
Wassup Baby Girl
Wassup baby girl you know there is something I’m missing that one … I just need you to tell me one thing listen on your gotta a lot of things on your mind but lets just figure this out and spend some time on thinking about whets really holding you back from telling me all the feats cause I need to know just tell me there just pick the phone call me girl that’s all I need from you to tell me how you fell so we can succeed to the better things in life instead of playing all these games acting like we dent care even though we fell the same.
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5 comments:
okay, so you should work on your spelling ALOT and i think punctuation but not much. you did, um, good? i like how you don't just ask for sex, so that's a good thing.
Oscar. haha this is good. It show's that you love this girl you talk about. Its cute. Haha keep it up.
You foun love or what. Thats whats up though you can say what you feel about her and leave the games.
Wow I like this Poem cuz it shows how you really are and your really kind to girls
Nice job, but to be honest i think you should go over it and check your spelling. Plus LAST POEM I READ OF YOURS SOUNDS JUST LIKE THIS ONE. Maybe make it a little more interesting.
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