As the gold sun hits my soul
Laying there, the gold light
Coming from every direction.
It can never be lost.
Ad I lie there blinded
From the beauty
Blinded from the soft tenderness
Of the feeling I have.
The words can’t explain
The feeling I have.
It fills my heart
And soul with loyalty
Love and….
So much more.
8 comments:
No one seems to realize the beauty of everything around us. Be proud that you are one of the few who have the realization that things are not just about us, we are part of everything around us. We are everything, yet we are nothing compared to the extraordinary power that surrounds us. Pure beauty. You did a good job because I agree it is indescribable unless you have experienced it; Enlightenment. Good job at breaking out of the trend that us humans create, which is evil. Keep it up and life will go so much better.
Great poem. I liked it a lot. Well written.
Hmm, great use of words font size little to small but great poem about your true feelings.
I think that you did a great job! I like this poem, i think you explained pretty good! Keep up the good work Brandee :) :) :)
i think this poem was really beautiful you did feel good on explaining on how it made you feel.
Great poem. I liked it a lot. Well written. great job
i could never doupt the momentum you have your heart is full of laughter and sorrow but the poem was great
Brandee I love this poem cuz the poem it's you you shine like a star and your caring you are beautiful inside an out
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