Your hands touching
My face, rubbing your
Thumbs back and forth
Looking me in my eyes.<3
Holding my hand
Smiling and laughing
Laying down beside each other.<3
Walking down a narrow path
Never knowing what’s
Going to happen when
We’re together.<3
The warmth.
Your soft tenderness
The smile that lets me know
That you care.<3
13 comments:
aww<3 I loved it cause it's so you lol. It's something that you would write about haha. I love it cause it makes me think you really do love him<3 It was very detailed so it was dope! ((:
People think gag me with a spoon when us girls write love poems. Dang, I know how you feel girl. This is amazing and cute(: Love is a powerful thing!
♥Elee
Wow cute, great job. I like how you use feeling in it.
Oh gosh, that is so cute! i like how you wrote this poem. You did an awesome job on it! I like that you put you feelings into it also! Awesome Job!
This is very true brandee i love this poem. You did a great job on it.
i like how told how it makes you feel with this person and its really beautiful
This a great poem because i and im sure many of peaple arround me could relate to.
Awwww how cute. i like this because you express you self of how you feel when your with him. You did an awesome job girl.
this pretty good brandeen i like it i didnt think it would be good but u surprise me i really i like how told how it makes you feel with this person and its really beautiful
i like this poem its cute
wow this is a really nice poem and i think its true for you in you situation....
this is a sick poem good job
This poem is cute because every time I see you are happy I hope you will stay in a healthy relationship and stay with a guy will treat you rite to
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