It didn’t take much to lose your trust
Just one time for you to f*** up
Knuck up
Buck up
Take some ownership
But you can’t even do that much
So you just dip
Try to come back to me
You’ll get hit
I’ll make you look like a fool
And laugh in your face
It sure didn’t take long for you to be replaced
Yes! I’m trying to rub it in your face
You started this all in the first place
You think I’ll take you back
Only if I was wack
So lay off the crack
I’ve moved on.
And starting my new song
13 comments:
Wow, great use of emotion and choice of words. I like it. Good poem.
Carly!!
Wow this is freaking AMAZING.
i know how you feel, lol you couldn't have wrote it any better. Ture emotion is the best. He's stupid for loosing a girl like you. :) Keep it up girl.!
Carly.! :] Good job on the poem. I love the way you described everything and how you used your rapping skills. Haha. Good job
I guess i know not to talk to you if i get you mad jk good poem though I think your poem is so true you cant f*ck up like that and expect everything is still gonna be chill
haha thats whats carly!! but you did hella good i really like this poem
Carly, I love this! You couldn't have said that anymore perfect. I'm glad you're strong and can say good bye and you still keep your head up. I love your confidence and how you are so sure.
this poem has truth written all over it, and really down to heart. I really like that and your really creative on words. "Great job"
Sounds to me like someone did you wrong and you did a good job of telling it. good emotion.
Hell yeah girl that's whats up tell him was up. Guys that are stupid and play there fucking games end up loosing something that is worth a lot. I like this poem i like how u express your feelings.
hey carly i really liked your poem i think that its really true.i didnt think that u were a girl like that thats cool and shows that you really care thats cool i think thats cool..
i love this poem... its soo true about how life is with relationships.
Carly I love you because when you want someone to know how you feel you tell them straight up how you feel and you won't let no one put you down
Trust is something you earn. You can't just take it. I really like how you expressed yourself. Good job. :)
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