This is the best thing in the
World
In my mind it’s the answer for everything
It can help all your problems
It’s indescribable
It’s my therapy
It can help me cheer up when
I’m down
It has all sorts of different
Meanings
If you listen closely
You can hear the message
It makes me feel untouchable
Like there is nothing but peace in the world
Everyone should listen to it
It’s my life
12 comments:
Is it marijuana? i like how you wrote it up. you could work on explaining what it is because i know for me its mary jane. i like how you say that it helps you. (whatever it is)
It is your life. Always remember your the only writer of it. Life is amazing and full of exciting adventures, just don't get in the wrong one.
♥Elee
I love music so I loved your poem. Music is like the sound of life. It really does make things easer like when you're having a bad day you can lissent to music, drift away and put them on.
I love this one because music is also my life.I'm an artist of music so i can relate how you feel. I love the line (it's my life)and(In my mind it’s the answer for everything). This one is nice good job.
I agree that music is like therapy. i listen to music all the time. It helps calm you down i like that you wrote about this! Great Job
i am with you Kyley i love music to it keeps me happy when i don't have my family. im glade we have somethings in common, and keep your head up you doing hella good much love bye.
Good job on this poem and explaining how it's your therapy. I like it. I feel the exact same way when I listen to music. :]
has you can see a lot of people agree with you and it is so true if im made or sad ill just listen to music and everything is chill again
you did really good an i think that this is true about music and you did really good explaning how it made you feel
this is a really good poem because it can relax you and make you feel good sometimes.. it just takes your mind away from yoour problems. good job on this poem
Kyley!
This was great. Are you talking about music? Becuase that's how i would write it if its about music. Well its great, for you hating to write poems lol.
music does help lots of people and even me i do got anger problems but music takes it awayi know ur feeling
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