Really Vosco? I feel that this poem does carry any weight with it. I think that it needs to be longer. It's simple very simple so good job.
hey Vosco! i think that this poem is great! I agree your life is your life, no one else's. keep up the good work! :)
Hmmm great job using two people and your feeling use more choice of words.
I like the way you worded this poem! You have alot of emotions. I like how you write them and express them! Keep it up! Great job!
i like this poem because its soo true about ppl and its true it is our life soo dont get in the way of ppl's life if its not yours
I love this poem. It shows that we are all different people. I think it also says that we pretty much need to take responsibility for our own life. Good job!
You always have good poems it's like you write with your heart in your hand. It looks to me that you write how you feel.
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Really Vosco? I feel that this poem does carry any weight with it. I think that it needs to be longer. It's simple very simple so good job.
hey Vosco! i think that this poem is great! I agree your life is your life, no one else's. keep up the good work! :)
Hmmm great job using two people and your feeling use more choice of words.
I like the way you worded this poem! You have alot of emotions. I like how you write them and express them! Keep it up! Great job!
i like this poem because its soo true about ppl and its true it is our life soo dont get in the way of ppl's life if its not yours
I love this poem. It shows that we are all different people. I think it also says that we pretty much need to take responsibility for our own life. Good job!
You always have good poems it's like you write with your heart in your hand. It looks to me that you write how you feel.
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