That she was in the bus and she was in the front and same guy side that she cant set there and she headed to move back because she was black and black and black people don’t have that mach rights because only where black and she did a speech about rights and hoe they can have more freedom and there life’s
In 1957 Mrs. Parks and her husband moved to patriot and when she arrested on a Thursday evening and at the age of 11 she enroiled in the Montgomery industrial and that when she use the bus they cant set on the front of the bus or they well get arrested because they cant set there only white people can set there and they well get mad only because they are black
That when she was little she went to a private school founded by liberal-minded women from the northern united states
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i like that you did some of your paper but you need to make your paragraghs to make more sence it looks like your just writing random words
I really like some of the points you made in your essay. I think you could have put more thought into it, and worked on the punctuation. I learned that Rosa Parks got arrested for not doing what the white people wanted.
rosa parks is a great person and you portrayed information on her child hood. WORK ON YOUR WORDING, i was confused on it all i could figure out what you were trying to say its illegigible. the only thing i learned about your report is that she was arrested at the age of 11 but not why or what for.
1-Its good that you actually did the paper...
2- Try to get the facts on Rosa Parks, dont juss say stuff that you might know, try to make everything make sence " was black and black and black people" that line didnt make sence.
3- i knew everything about Rosa Parks.
1. Your really good on telling why black people couldnt do what white people could. 2 you could add more facts and tell us a little more about her journy. 3. i didnt know she went to a privite school when she was younger.
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