She is going insane as she sits in this white room.
Not knowing when and where to open her eyes
It’s killing her to watch these people yell and scream; she drowns herself in her own river of tears.
Her hands are locked and she can not seem to get out of the ball
That she is curled in.
It’s as if she needs to burst out of her shell
The one that is driving her crazy.
The white walls start pounding in her face those white padding’s push against her cheek. She gets up and opens the door
She found herself standing at the top of the staircase lost
For words
Her dad yells up the stairs “shut your dam door”
5 comments:
I really liked how you explained this. you could work on spelling but not much. i think you have a great poem.
Great poem i like it, it give a reality twist to it, but it doesnt flow much and needs a little more detail.
Great JOB SIRENA!!! i think this was a great poem, cuz you let your feelings out and your not scared to write about anything! i like it its hella good!! Keep up the good work Chicka!!! love your face keep yo head up :) :) :)
i like all your poems they are really meaning full. if they was any longer it would bring tears to my eyes.Because i don't think a person should feel like that and you are doing really goooooood.....
I really like your poem i wish i new what it meant. Because to me it looks like your feeling trapped like if no one understands you. Or i mean the person in the poem. but you honestly did a nice job.
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